Book Pet Peeve #256
If I pick up the book and the back cover summary starts with a question
What would you do if the girl you loved was being hunted?
I reject it out of hand.
Just cut straight to “Jade’s girlfriend disappears unexpectedly, leaving only a note in frantic script telling Jade not to look for her—the demons had returned.”
I’m not summary writer, but I find plot details more interesting than breathy questions.